Thanks for the encouragement folks
Well it's been all that I could think of since Ken's timely critique and I've been working so bloody hard to get the Home Page looking, reading and sounding better.
So I crossed my fingers and ripped it apart today. The idea of creating a Reusable Block on my 'Playground' hidden page and then placing any edits to the Home Page in there worked. I then just added it to my Index Page and arranged it all there the way I wanted to.
There's a lot of editorial on the page now and I've moved the thumbnail images quite a fair way down the page. Something I had to talk myself into doing. I have added anchor links throughout the content for thems that don't want to read the editorial
I haven't used any 'I'
on the page at all I hope and I've tried to think if I was a new visitor to this page, would I want to hang around and read more?
But, hey, I'll stop telling you want I have done as I want an unbiased viewpointSo without further ado here it is!
But before you take a look at it this is an image of the page as it used to be taken last year on the 13th October, thank you Mr Wayback Machine https://web.archive.org/web/20161013182 ... ourne.com/And here it is as it stands today.http://www.family-getaways-melbourne.com/
I'm popping it up here before I submit it for a formal review as Ken states here ...
When you are totally done, have pushed and made each bit the very best it can be, please start a totally new thread and then, just to make sure I don't miss it, let Support know that it's up (refer back to this thread in the new one so folks can better understand the context).
In this post ... https://forums.sitesell.com/viewtopic.php?p=1367204#p1367204
Love to get some input if anyone has the time or inclination
Now I'm off have a shower. I stink!
The house looks like a bomb has gone off and the cat looks like it has been strangled